One moment, please? (Triolet)
Give me but a moment of your timeand I will explain myself anewwithin the minutiae of rhyme,give me but a moment. Of your time, I know the limits are set so finefew moments are spare. How much can...
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hey ... I've got a few moments to give ... so tell!"For long you live and high you fly, and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry, and all you touch and all you see is all your life will ever be."...
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Nicely done; good variations in the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines.Jason
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Thanks, Jason...still learning...I've been meaning to try one of these ever since I saw your trio of triolets...but these are tricky litte verses!!!Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings...
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